I have been given feedback about 3 areas of my work. Camera: I will now push myself in this area of the course as I have not been as adventurous with its movements and settings. Scriptwriting: I have been told that in my first few renditions of scripts that I use too many parentheticals and that I need to describe the scene a bit better, I will work on this whenever we next do more scriptwriting. Editing: I need to make my transitions more smooth by keeping a backtrack that is constantly playing over many scenes and make my cuts less harsh.