18.11.19 p2

I have been given feedback about 3 areas of my work.

Camera:

I will now push myself in this area of the course as I have not been as adventurous with its movements and settings.

Scriptwriting:

I have been told that in my first few renditions of scripts that I use too many parentheticals and that I need to describe the scene a bit better, I will work on this whenever we next do more scriptwriting.

Editing:

I need to make my transitions more smooth by keeping a backtrack that is constantly playing over many scenes and make my cuts less harsh.